Tuesday, November 29, 2005

Essay Format

Essay Format
English
Mr. Beh



INTRODUCTION: 1 paragraph
Attention Getter: quote, joke, interesting fact, strong statement, etc…
Background: creates context for the reader.
Thesis: subject + opinion = thesis
Main Points: Preview the main points that you will cover in your essay.


BODY: paragraphs = # of main points
Topic Sentence: thesis + main point = T.S.
Commentary: explains your opinion on the main point.
Concrete Detail: supports and backs up your opinion.


CONCLUSION: 1 paragraph
Review Thesis: reiterates thesis and main points.
Beyond Thesis: relates thesis to a larger context.



How to start a paper: 1. Choose a subject.
2. Form an opinion.
3. Create main points.
4. Verify your support for each main point.



Once you have chosen the subject you want to write about, you must form an opinion about that subject. This gives you a thesis (subject + opinion = thesis). You must then come up with main points (usually at least three) that you can use to explain and prove your thesis. It is important before beginning to write your paper that you verify that you have support for each of your main points, otherwise they will do you no good and you will have to create other main points.
After completing these steps, you can begin writing your paper. I suggest that you first create an outline that you can follow, to ensure that while writing your paper you don’t wander off topic or change the focus of your writing.

Essay Organization

Essay Organization
English
Mr. Beh

When writing an essay, it is important to keep your information well organized. Think about reading a repair manual for a car or an instruction booklet for a video game. What do you want to be able to do? Usually, we want to be able to find the information that we want quickly and easily. You don’t want to have to read the entire manual or booklet three times over, just to be able to figure out what you want to know.
The same principal applies when writing and reading essays. A writer must organize her thoughts in a way that makes accessing and understanding it simple and easy. Readers want the information without having to do too much rereading and decoding. The best way to create an essay that is simple and easy to read and understand is to follow a few simple guidelines.

Write using a simple essay format.
Introduction, Body, and Conclusion
Keep every point in the essay in a consistent order.
Point #1 should always be discussed first, Point # 2 second, and so on.
Order your points from the least to the most important.
Finish your essay with a flourish.

Example
Intro Paragraph
Points Previewed
#1 Least important
#2 More important
#3 Most important
Body Paragraph #1
Discuss Point #1
Body Paragraph #2
Discuss Point #2
Body Paragraph #3
Discuss Point #3
Conclusion Paragraph
Review Point #1
Review Point #2
Review Point #3

Tuesday, November 15, 2005

effects of consumerism

Brief overview
http://volunteernow.ca/take_action/issues_consumerism.htm
Poverty in the U.S.
http://www.census.gov/hhes/www/poverty/poverty.html
World View
http://www.globalissues.org/
http://earthwatch.unep.net/poverty/index.php
Maps
http://www.povertymap.net/
http://gamapserver.who.int/mapCenter/default.aspx
http://www.fivims.org/map.jspx?show_result=true&lang=en
http://130.166.124.2/US_Pov.html

Saturday, October 22, 2005

I bring to your attention; News Hounds

I'm going to take a step away from the principle of neutrality for this post and say that I'm not fond of FOX news at all. One may even say I dislike them; nay, strongly dislike. To watch it but five minutes exceeds my acceptable daily dose of sensationalist garbage, sweeping generalisations, and infotainment. I therefore bring to your attention News Hound, whose motto is "We watch FOX so you don't have to." 'Tis a nice little site, they appear to use mostly good information that you can research yourself if you wanted, though I've only looked at it for about five minutes so I can't say that applies to all of it, and I expect that people this passionate in their criticism of FOX would have at at least one point said something that simply isn't true. I encourage you all to go learn what people have to say about FOX, whether you think it's good or bad.

Mass Media Monopolies

As is known, there is a tendancy among corporations to merge, creating even larger corporations. In media, it has come to the point that five single companies control the vast majority of media. I don't think too many people would disagree when I say that corporations are largely looking for a profit, and are willing to do something not in the interest of the people to achieve it. You probably recognise all five corporations: Time Warner, Disney, Murdoch's News Corporation, Bartelsmann Media, and Viacom. If you don't, you'll certainly recognise some of their assets.

Time Warner owns: CNN, HBO, Cinemax, Turner Classic Movies, TBS, TNT, Cartoon Network, The WB Television Network (though shared with Tribue Company,) AOL, Compuserve, Mirabilis, Mapquest, Netscape, Nullsoft, Time Warner Cable, Time Warner Book Group, TIME Magazine, People Magazine, Sports Illlustrated Magazine, MAD Magazine, 'Fortune, Money' Magazine, Warner Bros., New Line Cinema, Castle Rock Entertainment, the Atlanta Braves, DC Comics, Rhino Entertainment, Turner Entertainment, and various other channels and magazines.

Disney owns: ABC Radio & TV, ESPN Radio, Radio Disney, ABC Family, abc1, ESPN, Disney Channel, Toon Disney, SoapNet, Lifetime, with partial ownership of A&E Network, History Channel, Biography Channel, E!, and HBO Latin America, the magazines Los Angeles Magazine, Discover, Us Weekly, and many Disney-themed magazines, Buena Vista Motion Pictures Group, Walt Disney Pictures, Walt Disney Feature Animation, Touchstone Pictures, Hollywood Pictures, Caravan Pictures, Miramax Films, Dimension Films, Walt Disney Records, Hollywood Records, Mammoth Records, Lyric Street Records, Disney Theatrical, the Disney Book Group of Hyperion Books, Miramax Books, ESPN Books, ABC Daytime Press, Hyperion East, Hyperion Audiobooks, Hyperion Books for Children, Jump at the Sun, Michael DiCapua Books, Disney Press, and Disney Editions, the Go.com web portal, Infoseek, Movies.com, 26 other radio stations, 10 other television stations, Disneyland Resorts in California, Florida, France, and China, and dozens of hotels and resorts.

Murdoch's News Corporation owns: HarperCollins Book Publishing Company, ReganBooks, Zondervan Christian Book Publisher, over a dozen Australian newspapers, several UK newspapers, one in Fiji, one in Papua New Guinea, the US tabloid 'New York Post,' InsideOut Magazine, SmartSource magazine, TV Guide Magazine (partial ownership,) Weekly Standard Magazine, Festival Mushroom Records, half of the National Rugby League in Australia and New Zealand, the majority of the Bribane Broncos, the Melbourne Storm, and the North Queensland Cowboys, a fifth of the New York Knicks and New York Rangers, two fifths of the Staples Center, and 9.8% of the Los Angeles Lakers, 20th Century Fox, Fox Searchlight, Fox Television Studios, Fox Studios in Australia, Sydney, New South Wales, Baja, Rosarito, and Baja California, the Fox Broadcasting Company, Fox Television Stations Group, parts of BSkyB, DirecTV Group, Hughes Network Systems, DirectWay, Foxtel, Sky Italia, and Star TV, Fox Movie Channel, Fox News Channel, Fox Sports Net, Fox Soccer Channel, Fox Sports [in Spanish,] FX Networks, National Geographic Channel, SPEED Channel, MySpace, IGN, News.com.au, and NDS.

Bertelsmann Media owns but six others, but they are rather large. They own RTL Group, Gruner & Jahr (largest European magazine publisher, second in the world,) Bertelsmann Music Group (BMG,) Random House (largest trade book publisher,) Direct Group (largest book and music club group,) and Arvato (an international media service provider.)

Viacom owns: Infinity Broadcasting, Metro Networks, MTVi Group, CBS Internet Group, Nickelodeon Online, BET.com, Contentvile (partial,) Neopets, SportsLine.com, Paramount Pictures, MTV Films, Nickelodeon Movies, Republic Pictures, United International Pictures (partial,) Paramount Parks, The Free Press, MTV Books, Nickelodeon Books, Simon & Schuster, Pocket Books, Scribner, Touchstone, CBS, UPN, MTV, Nickelodeon/Nick At Nite, TV Land, CMT, Spike TV, Paramount Comedy, VH1, Noggin/The N, Showtime Networks, Showtime, The Movie Channel, Sundance CHannel (joint with NBC and Robert Redford,) FLIX, SET Pay-Per-View, BET, Comedy Central, TMF, VIVA, Paramount Television, Spelling Entertainment Group, Big Ticket Television, Viacom Productions, King World Productions, CBS Productions, CBS Broadcast International, Eyemark Entertainment, CBS Paramount International Television, 17 CBS-affiliated stations, 19 UPN-affiliated stations, the WB affiliate WTCN, the Azteca America affiliate WWHB, and the independant station of KCAL.

Now, if you were to spent a few hours to research the further holdings of each of these, I imagine you'd be hard pressed to find much that isn't ultimately owned by these five corporations. These corporations exert immense control over what it is we see, and they do it for profit. What is important may not be what sells, so they may air something else to up their profits. Important matters have a tendancy to be overlooked when there is something more popular to be heard, (say, the trial of a celebrity such as Michael Jackson,) and many people hear of nothing else because the interests of these Big Five are felt throughout a great majority of all media.

It was said during the founding years of America, that to make the nation work, there must be true freedom of the press. What we have is not truly a free press. Mass media has caused the majority of us to become blind to important issues by only putting sensationalist stories on their front pages and between their commercials. I cannot remember a single time that I've seen an article that wasn't sensationalist as the featured story on the televised news nor on the front page of a newspaper. How is this at all acceptable? News should be in the interests of the people, not a cash cow for an elite few.

Tuesday, October 18, 2005

New super-duper blog assignment #6

-You are responsible for researching a television topic of interest to you.

-You must take the topic and look at it from a critical perspective.
http://www.wsu.edu/~amerstu/pop/tvrguide.html
http://www.sourcewatch.org/index.php?title=Research_using_the_web

- The assignment is to write a five paragraph blog.
#1 Introduction (must have a thesis)
#2 Body A (must have a link for support)
#3 Body B (must have a link for support)
#4 Body C (must have a link for support)
#5 Conclusion (must address why this issue is important to our society)

- Suggestions for topics
Class
Race
Gender
Sexuality
Sex
Violence
News
Government
Corporate
Crime
Human Interest Stories
Entertainment News
Consumer News
Sports
Sit-Coms
Police Dramas
Etc........................................

- This will be due at the end of class on Tuesday, October 25th

Friday, October 14, 2005

Friday, October 14th

Today in class, we watched a short video about media reform. If you missed class, please go to http://www.freepress.net/ and poke around to get an idea of what we saw.

Thursday, October 13, 2005

Blog Assignment #5

CRITICAL VIEW OF TELEVISION

- According to dictionary.com, being critical is characterized by careful, exact evaluation and judgment.

- Your job is to search the web to find web sites that are critical of the media. There are many of them. (suggested search terms: critical media, critical television)

- When you find something of interest, post a link, a description of the site, and your thoughts on it.

Tuesday, October 11, 2005

Blog Assignment #4 (Television Companies)

-Your assignment is to find out what the major television companies are.
-Who owns NBC, ABC, CBS, FOX, MTV, HBO, TBS, etc...
-There are five of them.
-Make sure you identify all of their television holdings.

-In your post, give your thoughts on the structure of these media corporations.
-Reflect on the fact that almost all television news is controlled by these corporations.
-What effect might the structure of these corporations have on our society?

-Include links to the websites of each of these corporations.